Startropics Fanfictions

[startropicsmaster]

As you all know, there is a Fanfiction on Startropics by Erico on [glow=red,2,300]http://www.fanfiction.net/s/987106/1/[/glow], well, I'm creating my own now called Startropics: Enter the Spaceship! At my rate of speed, it should be done by...oh..say...December 2008!(LOL) JK, anyway, I will post a few parts as I get them finished so ya'll can read em' and let me know what you think.

[Michael Jones]

That sounds cool! Just I hope Erico won't be mad if he sees you're doing the same. Did you get the idea from his posts or was it your own idea?

[startropicsmaster]

well, I'm kinda following up on Erico's story, but I got the idea from him/her.

[Michael Jones]

Ok. This topic. should of been in general ST though. Why did you put it here?

[startropicsmaster]

cause it's off topic, or so I thought!(?)

[Scotty D.]

It is...but it isn't. Fanfics are kinda iffy on that subject. I, for one, would have posted it in the Fan Games section, as it seems to fit in closest with that topic of discussion...but whatever. I hope to see some work soon, stm!

[startropicsmaster]

ok, i'm planning to work on it some more tonight when I get home from school.

[Coralcola]

Weren't we talking a little bit ago about how some of us wanted to write our own FanFics and that Erico better watch it or he may have some competition? You could give Erico a run for his money STM!

My suggestion for you STM is that you must be sure you are dedicated to doing this, b/c we don't want to see you write 3 chapters of a 10 chapter story and then stop for lack of time our whatever the case may be (that has hindered people millions of times over human history ). I know you'd be disappointed if this happened, and we'd be disappointed that we wouldn't be able to hear the end of the story that you had started. This is exactly why I have not bothered to sit down and write my own ST story at home here, even though I've been mentally writing it for like 10 years now. I tried writing a Tom Clancy-like novel a few years ago, and I only have one chapter completely done and like 15 chapters partially done. I get busy sometimes, and other times when I'm actually sitting down and writing it, nothing is clicking too well and I stop for the sake of the story.

I hope that doesn't happen to you, and I wish you all the luck in the world with writing it.

[startropicsmaster]

thanks alot. I promise I won't stop until it's compleated. Wrather it's 5 days or 5 months. I won't stop until it's fin. As a matter of fact, when I get off the computer, I'm going to cont. typing it. I have done that before with 2 sets of stories. One was the Super Sayan Child(From Dragonball Z) I got 11 chapters, but stopped. And a Inuyasha storie collection that I did 1 chapter and stopped. But that WILL NOT happen with this one.

[Scotty D.]

Have you submitted anything to FanFiction.net yet? If so...could you give us a link to see what you've got? I'm anxious to see what you've got done so far.

[startropicsmaster]

well, I tried, but it didn't go! STUPID FF!

(see Southern cross updates for more on this and if u can help!)

[startropicsmaster]

well, here's chapter 1 of my FF. Hope ya'll like it:

Startropics: Enter the Spaceship

Chapter 1

I’m Mike Jones. I am a simple 16 year old and an ace pitcher. Last month, I stole 3 magic cubes from Zoda, an evil alien that came to Earth to take back the magic cubes after Hirocon, the ruler of Argonia, sent them to Earth to protect them. I was able to get them back to Coralcola and form them into a stack and they began to glow rapidly. All of a sudden, appeared 7 boys and girls! Yes, I said 7 kids. After the kids were released, they adapted to our lifestyle. After about 2 days, I fell in love with the princess of Argonia, Mica. After about another week, I told her that, and sure enough, she felt the same way about me, too! We kissed and started to go out. Over the last month, I’ve gotten into a fight with Ezilian(one of the Argonian boys I saved), found out that I have Shilivre(an Argonian form of communication and attack), played a baseball game with everyone, and...oh yea...nearly gotten killed ½ a dozen times. Everything happened, passed on, and soon was forgotten. However, what happened that horrible day, the 2nd of August, wasn’t forgotten to this day!. The one of my nightmares, the one that I killed, or so I thought,...Zoda! He appeared on C-Island that day and injured one of my friends, nearly killed Ezilian, and killed the chief’s sister, also known as out island shaman, Bana Omoy. Well, after that, he knocked out Mica(D__n him!) and took her onto the spaceship. “No! I won’t let you take her!” I screamed as I jumped in after him, although very injured. “You fool! Get out!” Zoda snapped as he smacked me straight back to the ground. I fell unconscious instantly. The next thing that I knew, I was in a bed with a rag over my forehead. “Where...Where am I?” I asked myself, unaware that someone was there. “The chief’s hut” Hapo, the chief of Coralcola, said. “Uh! Where’s the spaceship!?’ I asked sitting up and sending the rag flying off my forehead. “It’s gone!” Hapo said as he pushed the new visitor of his face. “I have to go find it!” I yelled as I jumped up, took a few steps and fell onto my knees. “Your too injured! Stay put!” Hapo said loudly. “Hmph, hold on a sec.” I said. I began to put my energy into the wounds. A moment later, a few of the wounds disappeared as the broken nerves started to for back together. However, this wore me out and I fell off my knees and onto the floor, breathing as if I just ran a marathon. “Mike! Are you ok?” Hapo asked as he got on his knees to check on the better, but exhausted 16 year old. Well, after that little incident, I healed nicely and found my uncle’s Sub-C. It was a little battered and dented, but was still looking like a nice piece of machinery. It’s still locked like a metal supermodel, but now one that was on a bit of “chocolate diet”.
I took Sub-C to the one place that I believed Zoda would be, Howduyadocola. After I arrived, I got out and ran through every one of the caves, killing all of the rats, undead, and other freaky enemies I fought before. “I thought that they were dead!” I began to worry as I began to proceed further. Once I got to the end, I found the spaceship in the same spot as before. “Well, your all about different aren’t you, Zoda!” I said sarcastically as I entered the spaceship. When I entered, I saw Mica, unconscious in the floor inside a cage. I also saw Zoda standing in front of a lot of a large group of the green armored aliens. “Oh S__T!’ Mike whispered at the site. A few of the aliens turned to look at the place where the sound came from, but I was already around the corner, and sweating like crazy. Suddenly, a blaster shot blew up a small piece of the wall about 5 inches from where I was standing. “EAK!” I screamed before covering my mouth. “What was that!?” Zoda screamed as he started toward the corner. I did the only thing I could, RUN! I took of as fast as I could, heading for the door, but I stopped shortly after. “What ar you doing, Mike! Go save the princess, go save Mica, go save your love!” I began to think to myself. “No...no, I can’t run, I will continue! For Loyalty! For Victory! ....For Love!

For Mica!” I turned to head back and saw Zoda and about 30 green aliens heading straight for me. “HUMAN SCUM! I TOLD YOU TO STAY AWAY!” Zoda screamed as he pulled up his blaster. He shot one of the blasts at me and struck my arm a little. It stung like getting hit by 20 baseballs in one spot being pitched by a pro baseball player. “AHHHHHHHHHHH!” I screamed as I jumped into a small room that had lots of packages and weapon cases. Once I was in, a large, metal door closed behind me. The aliens shot about 20 blasts at the door, but it did nothing. “Let him be. In about 3 hours, he’ll run out of air and we won’t have to deal with him any longer.” Zoda said to the aliens calmly as they started to walk away. That’s where I am now, this luggage chamber. It’s been about 20 minutes sense I got locked in here. I’ve been sitting here trying to stop the bleeding on my arm and I must say that it’s died down a lot, but is still bleeding a little. I’ve lost about a quart of blood already, but shouldn’t lose much more with what’s left of the bleeding. After about 5 more minutes, the bleeding stopped altogether. “Now, to deal with this air crises” I said to myself as I looked around for a hole or window or something! I found nothing. “Well, I’ll just have to make one, then!” I said as I reached for my Super Nova. “Where is my Super Nova!” I yelled as I stuck my fingers through my pants loop where the Super Nova should’ve been. “I...Oh God, oh my God, I’m....I’m going to die here!” I concluded. “...Mica...I failed you...I’m sorry” I said as I began to sob. Just then, the ship began to start up and take off. “What the...? Where are we going?” I asked myself, knowing I couldn’t answer them. The ship began to take speed and knocked me flat on my behind.

[startropicsmaster]

hey y'all, I'm making a new FF. It's on Startropics(of course) and i'm already up to chapter 8! It's pretty big, but has a lot more work needed. I'll give ya'll updates as I go. it's called "Daja Vu"

;D

[Scotty D.]

I believe the correct spelling is "Deja"...just an observation ;D

[startropicsmaster]

really, oops. Sry. Everyone got what I meant though.